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Sheliak ([personal profile] sheliak) wrote in [community profile] idproquo 2025-03-29 07:07 am (UTC)

Misc freeform typos:

Aromantic character has one expection who they are madly in love with
-> should be "exception"

Arranged Marriage - A and B are in an arranged marriage and C is the missing peice that helps them fall in love
-> should be "piece"

Character trying to get off descreetly by stimulating only the glans
-> should be "discreetly"

A kicks Bs ass in a fight so B promptly falls in love with A
-> "B's"

murder is a more serious commitment than marriage <3
-> punctuation should not be there

Obsession - A so far gone for B theyd let B do whatever they wanted to them (B very pleased by this)
- "they'd" (I think this may've been for the hundred-char limit but now it's higher?)

Sex pollen between mutally pining characters
-> "mutually"

Xeno - Oops Didn't Know This Alien's Sex Fluids Altered Other Species To Be Biologically Compatable For Reproduction
-> "Compatible"

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